Please reviewcritique my song

This is a demo of a song I wrote years ago and just came across it and decided to post it. Even thought it's a Christmas Song, I think it has potential if produced correctly. Constructive criticism and production ideas would be greatly appreciated. However, please do not leave nasty or rude remarks. It really is uncalled for. Again, as you can hear, it's just a demo - it was recorded in my bedroom. I'm hoping to have it rerecorded professionally for the 2015 Christmas Season.

Thank you

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